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FastFox	Jump_fox « on: November 11, 2013, 07:43:22 AM »
Maggot Posts: 3	Hey guys, i just did my first jump map, so posting here for some feedback you can see everything about the map here : http://tf2.gamebanana.com/maps/177187 If i'm breaking the rules by putting this link just tell me i'll upload screenshots and all (it's my first post here ) (I consider this map as finished and am currently working on a new map called jump_night, any advice will be useful to me for my next maps)

Torii	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #1 on: November 11, 2013, 08:41:30 AM »
Soldier Posts: 108 Whirlwind "Torii Hurricane"	1. Please put a trigger_hurt brush surrounding your map so we don't die after syncs, fall damage, etc 2. No cap point for either courses Easy course jumps are reaaaally easy and there're no jump numbers in both courses As for hard course, - I like jump1 - jump2, I assume it's a skip to sync? I did it by skipping and crouch-syncing at the bottom. I'd also assume that being able to shoot the ending plat is unintended. - jump8 the wall sticks outs slightly and you can clip on it, also the distance is rather short (did a water sync) - jump9, the double is a kinda redundant detailwise, I dunno I guess oddly-shaped, non-toolsblack teleport doors just seem weird to me. Can't say much 'bout the textures cuz I've been using a lot of dev myself :x. tut on placing a trigger_hurt http://forums.tf2jump.com/index.php/topic,499.0.html tut on placing cps http://forums.tf2jump.com/index.php/topic,505.0.html --------------------------- torii_v3 azure aurora_a3 gateway_final finite_a2

FastFox	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #2 on: November 11, 2013, 10:12:23 AM »
Maggot Posts: 3	Quote from: Torii on November 11, 2013, 08:41:30 AM 1. Please put a trigger_hurt brush surrounding your map so we don't die after syncs, fall damage, etc 2. No cap point for either courses Easy course jumps are reaaaally easy and there're no jump numbers in both courses As for hard course, - I like jump1 - jump2, I assume it's a skip to sync? I did it by skipping and crouch-syncing at the bottom. I'd also assume that being able to shoot the ending plat is unintended. - jump8 the wall sticks outs slightly and you can clip on it, also the distance is rather short (did a water sync) - jump9, the double is a kinda redundant detailwise, I dunno I guess oddly-shaped, non-toolsblack teleport doors just seem weird to me. Can't say much 'bout the textures cuz I've been using a lot of dev myself :x. tut on placing a trigger_hurt http://forums.tf2jump.com/index.php/topic,499.0.html tut on placing cps http://forums.tf2jump.com/index.php/topic,505.0.html thanks a lot for your advices, i'll try to make a v2 with cps and fixing some jumps asap

Tx_	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #3 on: November 11, 2013, 11:44:02 AM »
Maggot Posts: 13 asdf	really nice map for your first i really enjoy it ---------------------------

The BQE	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #4 on: November 11, 2013, 12:30:13 PM »
Soldier Posts: 135	I assume this is unintended, but you can stand on this tiny overhang where the fail teleport layer doesn't reach.

obsidiian	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #5 on: November 11, 2013, 08:02:41 PM »
Fly Posts: 56 Hi	The map is very square. It could use some better textures at some points, and obviously the 1st course is dev... Doors are very weirdly shaped and idk why you made them dev as well.

FastFox	Re: Jump_fox « Reply #6 on: November 12, 2013, 03:44:34 PM »
Maggot Posts: 3	Quote from: The BQE on November 11, 2013, 12:30:13 PM I assume this is unintended, but you can stand on this tiny overhang where the fail teleport layer doesn't reach. i already know about this, but it happened so rarely that i just left it there and kept doing the map, i'm adding it to my to-do list for v2 Quote The map is very square. It could use some better textures at some points, and obviously the 1st course is dev... Doors are very weirdly shaped and idk why you made them dev as well. I know the map is pretty square, but that's because it's my first map, and i have little time for map making so making open environments would take too much time for me. I'll probably change doors to something more acceptable. I'll keep dev textures for the beginner jumps because i think it's easier for beginners to have a simple colour code, and some great maps have dev textures, i don't think that's bothering many people.

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