nice map for your first
some things you can improve:
-put playerclips over stairs, so its a nice ramp you can slide on (ohw you apparently fixed that, but i did download the fixed version.. and i couldnt slide it :S, maybe i did something wrong...) -make the playerclips in air either seeable, or remove them -make all the teleports on ground 1unit so solly can pogo on them
(and for future maps, cos i don't think i saw any here: if you make tps not just above ground, make something else that makes it obvious there is a teleport, i for example used to use water, and now the red thingy you can see in rvr to indicate theres a tp (cos water sucks))
keep it up, i'd love to see more maps from you
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