Cool music and gameplay, the only thing is that if you are doing the lazy smooths with spectator, just dont move your camera (unless you have the hands of a robot). And also it would be better without the transitions (or just "fade to black" transition)
sv_cheats 1 r_drawdecals 0 -install some movie hud, or use Lawena recording tool -figure out what the sond files for soldier scream are called (something like soldier_painsevere1.mp3 and so on) and replace them with silent mp3's